December 3rd- Bitter, Bitter Sweet by Lucy

I woke with a start, not sure what disturbed me. I sat stone-still in the bedside chair and listened. Only night-at-the-hospital-sounds. The random footsteps, the intermittent ‘ping’ of the elevator just before the doors opened. No… nothing odd or threatening… so what then?

My attention was instantly focused on you as you moved slightly, a frown forming when you realized your body wasn’t readily responding to your brain’s command to ‘turn over’!

I was at your bedside before your next breath. I quickly moved the supporting pillows out of the way to allow you to change position. Your hands went automatically to your chest and belly, creating your own support. A small cough caught you by surprise and I quickly placed my hands over yours to splint you in case there was another. You groaned softly and let out the next breath with care. And now just like the million and three times before, I looked down at you and prayed–If only we could change places.

You opened your eyes and squinted a little as if things were somewhat blurry.

“Sorry,” you whispered.

“For what?” I asked.

“Waking ya’ up,” you answered with a wince as you tried to move your hip over those extra inches that would make you more comfortable.

I slipped my hands under your butt and gave you the small boost you needed. “You didn’t wake me; I was up.”

“Liar,” you said around a yawn and a sigh that signaled my boost had done the trick and sleep was fast approaching.

My hands slid slowly free of your hip, when what they really wished more than anything else, was to squeeze that flesh and pull your pelvis close and…

Knock it off or he’ll see something else on you is up!

I smiled and gently patted your thigh.

Before my fingers could slide away from your sleep-warmed skin, you grabbed my hand and pulled it up to you. Then you rested a sweet single kiss on my palm as your eyes closed.

“Yeah,” I whispered. “Love you, too!”

Lucys

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18 Responses to December 3rd- Bitter, Bitter Sweet by Lucy

  1. barancoire says:

    Aaawww…really for the heart – so beautiful!!!
    Very nice written!!!
    ;D

  2. Duluth says:

    Aww, that was sweet, especially with the picture at the end. Very nice!

  3. MsMoat says:

    Oh, really the ultimate hurt/comfort fandom. Thank you for this lovely scene.

  4. Melodi says:

    Oh, that was SOOO sweet!! LOVED it!! I never thought about how Hutch must have felt, sitting by Starsky’s side, waiting…

  5. provencepuss says:

    great use of the photo. 😀

  6. taass says:

    Lovely! Perfect little moment.

  7. Sagitta says:

    Definitely bittersweet! They’re always so attuned to each other.
    Thanks for sharing, Lucy!

  8. becky says:

    what a nice Christmas present.. lovely

  9. Sammy (Samudee) says:

    So sweet and beautiful. That picture at the end makes it all complete. Thanks you for this gem, Lucy!

  10. Hutcherie says:

    Awwww, that was sweet!!!! Thanks for sharing!!!!! 🙂

  11. Annie says:

    Absolutely perfect little h/c and romantic scene. Thanks for the gift

  12. anachron says:

    That was *so* beautiful. Thank you.

  13. marianrose says:

    Thank you for this beautiful gift. I love how you wrote this from Hutch’s point of view completely filled with his love of Starsky.

  14. Elaine says:

    Thank you…so sweet!

  15. Jennifer says:

    Thanks so much! Loved it.

  16. Hutcherie says:

    That´s so sweet! Thanks! Love it! 🙂

  17. wightfaerie says:

    Aww, such a sweet moment. Lovely. Thank you.

  18. hardboiledbaby says:

    A bittersweet moment, indeed. Lovely, thank you!

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