December 19th- Adventures of Stavish and Haaj Part 2 by DP Patricks

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STAVISH

My king, my companion and best friend is dying. I have some experience with battlefield medicine but a spear entering next to the spine and exiting the chest is a wound I have never seen anyone survive.

Radek and Axel gather on either side of us as I lay the king gently on his side on the ground. Blood bubbles from the full lips and I am more afraid than I’ve ever been in my life.

We had fought side-by-side through the afternoon and, as light faded, our force finally broke through the enemy’s line. The cowards threw down their weapons and fled but a villain rose from the mound of bodies behind us, savagely kicked Radek and Axel aside, and thrust his spear in Haajensen’s back. I slew the man with a single cut of my sword and caught my friend as he fell.

Now, as our forces trickle back to us, I order the king’s tent erected and water to be boiled. With Axel’s and my squire’s considerable help, I break off the head of the weapon and draw the shaft from Haajensen’s back. Radek is ready with pads of soft cloth to staunch the bleeding in front and behind.

Immediately the tent is ready, willing hands carry the king inside and cover him with blankets and wolf skins. Quietly, unable to help, they leave to set up camp and keep watch, all except Radek and Axel. I could not force them to go away if I threatened them with death. The physician flaps his hands, declares the king is already dead, and leaves.

I scour my knowledge of healing for any action I can take to stave off the fever that will creep into the vilely damaged body in my care. The blood has been stopped with the poultices Radek prepared, but too much has been lost and I have no way of replacing it! His right lung is punctured and no longer inflates with his shallow breathing. Whether ribs are splintered or the spine injured I have no way of knowing, until he wakes. If he wakes.

He does not and, as the hours pass, I become fearful to the point of despair. Sitting on a camp stool beside his bed, I clutch his hand in both of mine. “Please,” I whisper, so as not to disturb either of the squires who sleep in the corner, “you Norse gods and anyone else who can hear me, help me save the life of this good man. He is a ruler loved by his people, struck down by a cowardly attack. Please, don’t allow him to die.”

A woman’s figure materializes on the far side of the cot and it takes me several moments to realize it’s not my tortured brain’s imagination. I throw more charcoal on the brazier but the increased illumination does nothing to make the figure substantial. “If you are a spirit, come to take my friend, I will fight you!” I stand and draw my sword, ready to defend Haajensen with my life. “You will have to kill me first.”

She moves closer and, to my astonishment, reaches her right hand toward my king’s head. Her fingers hover over the golden strands. “He is my son.”

Stunned, I sit, and my blade falls to the ground. “I have heard your husband’s voice, Lady. Why did he not come, as he did before?”

“He fears Kenneth will be joining us soon and is having great difficulty with that prospect. He urged me to appear in his stead.”

“Are you here to help, then?” I ask, hating the whine in my voice. “Or to take him away from me?”

“The outcome of this night’s vigil is not in my hands, young warrior. But be assured that I have some favor in the eyes of the gods and I will petition them to save his life.”

“Will they listen?” I hardly dared breathe.

“That I cannot know until I ask,” she replies.

Her voice is soothingly melodious and my frayed nerves become slightly less tense. Still, I am desperate. “Since I believe there is not a moment to spare, madam, please do so as quickly as possible.”

“That I shall, Master Dawid. I simply wanted to assuage my curiosity as to the honor and steadfast nature of the one who has claimed my son’s heart.”

My own heart skips beats before racing. “Excuse me?”

Her smile is radiant and she envelopes me in it. “He has not yet told you, I know, but I perceive that he has found in you the person he has been seeking all his life. The person whose soul is as pure and honest as his, whose heart is as dedicated to the service of his people, and whose devotion to no more than one other, is second only to that which my son feels for the gods. He loves you.”

I speak without thinking. “As I love him!”

Her other hand lightly stirs the air over my head before she speaks again. “I’ll leave you now, and make my plea to Odin and the rest. If they will it, you should notice a change for the better by morning.” Her image fades, then disappears.

I had had visions before but none as real as this. Haajensen’s mother’s spirit is, without a doubt, as strong as his father’s. I place my forehead on the hand I clasp and wait.

Floating between wakefulness and sleep, I raise my head, sensing and half-seeing immensely powerful beings. They arrive and depart, converse softly in a language I do not understand — one that sounds as ancient as the rocks of the mountains — and study the still figure on the cot. An especially large form lowers a hand over the wound in Haajensen’s chest for what seems like a very long time. Finally, with an audible sigh of possible contentment, the figure withdraws.

When the last has departed, Haajensen’s mother’s spirit returns, a glow on her lovely face that tells me she has been successful.

“I sincerely hope the bargain you have struck, dear lady,” I say, “will not require too onerous a payment.”

Her light laughter sounds like ripples in a stream. “Not onerous at all, good sir. And one I and my husband will happily honor.”

“Thank you,” I murmur. “You have given me back my life, as well, for I would have been nothing without your son. Thank you.”

She brushes a nearly-felt kiss on my cheek and lays a shimmering hand on Haajensen’s head. “You will watch over each other and be happy.”

“Thank you,” I whisper again as her image dissolves.

With daybreak creeping into the tent, Haajensen stirs. He moans softly and opens his eyes. “Stav?”

“Shhhhh. Be still. You were sorely wounded and need to rest.” I nudge Radek’s foot with mine and he jumps to his feet. “The king is awake. Be quick and bring a bowl of warm broth as well as water to drink.”

With the sleepy-eyed Axel on his heels, they hurry outside. I can hear excited yelling as our squires spread the good news.

“My mother,” Haajensen whispers. “She was here?”

I bend and kiss the knuckles of his hand, knowing we will have only a few moments before we are interrupted. “Yes.”

“She interceded for me with the gods, didn’t she?”

“That did sound like her intention,” I reply.

“They came?” His tone is incredulous.

“I cannot swear to what happened. All I know is that, last night you were dying. This morning, you are alive — and will heal — with time, and care.”

“Your care.” He squeezes my hand and closes his eyes.

I begin to hear bustling and loud voices outside. Haajensen opens his eyes as if forgetting we had been talking, and peers toward the tent’s entrance. “Did we win the battle?”

I can’t help but laugh. “Yes, my king, we did.”

“That’s good.” He goes to sleep almost immediately leaving me to assure our knights and soldiers that their monarch would live.

HAAJENSEN

Stavish and I talk endlessly as I am conveyed back to the fortress in one of the covered supply wagons, on a bed of moss and dried reeds. At Stavish’s insistence, the matting is changed daily, in order to prevent mold and mildew. The trip, which took only days, outbound, requires many more on the way home. He sits with me constantly, whenever he is not tending the others who were wounded, refusing the physician’s meddling. And to my supposedly learned elder’s amazement and grumbling, I, and they, are more than content in Stavish’s capable hands. The quack will probably never forgive us and I find I am unconcerned.

An afternoon’s conversation lags and I believe I know what is causing periodic silences between us. As casually as possible, I take his hand. “Did my mother give away my secret?”

His face colors, but he stares at our entwined fingers and says nothing.

I keep my voice pitched below the sounds of the creaking wagon, horses’ hooves and tramping boot-shod feet, so that he will be assured that no one will overhear. “I’ve thought I was in love before, Stav. Once or twice.”

“But now?” His tone is more timid than I ever imagined it could be.

“Mother was right. You’re everything I’ve ever searched for in a mate, or a companion, a friend. I’ve fallen in love with you and want us to be lovers as well as brothers in arms.”

“You’ve beaten me to the words, Haaj, but not to the emotion. I’m in love with you, too.”

As soon as the words are out of his mouth, I feel a surge of energy through our hands. “Let us cement this new direction in our relationship as soon as possible after we return.”

“Only when I deem you are strong enough,” he intones, and I know he means it.

Needless to say, I recover as quickly as nourishing food, plenty of rest and moderate exercise allows. He is reluctant to agree to my assessment of what I knew was almost completely renewed good health but, under persistent urging and almost constant double-entendre references and pleas, he relents.

I have had lovers before but never one as considerate, inventive, passionate, and, at the same time, gentle as my Ambassador Stavish. From the moment I barred both doors to my chamber and we disrobed each other, it has been an adventure and a dream come true. I can wish for no other love for the remainder of my life.

STAVISH

I know I am detested by Osten Daag. More than ever, now that I share the king’s bed.

Axel has confided in me that Daag had hoped, with Severssen’s betrayal and death, that he, Daag, would become the king’s principal counselor. They’d been friends since boyhood so it was his natural assumption.

Instead, I, a foreigner, an interloper, according to what Axel and Radek tell me Daag is saying to anyone who will listen, have inveigled my way into the king’s confidence. What right have I, he asks, to such an exalted place at Haajensen’s side? I’m a newcomer. I haven’t been here through all the years of war and strife; I have no way of knowing the struggles everyone has endured.

In addition, Daag is claiming, now that Haajensen and I are never apart, that I will be the cause of the failure of Haajensen’s line. Since he is sleeping with only me, he will never sire an heir, Daag is telling people.

Sitting in the afternoon sun on the balcony outside the throne room, I know I must bring up the subject we’re both thinking about. “Osten Daag is right, you know. You have not listened to a single offer of marriage from any of the petitioners since I came to your court.”

He makes as if to respond but I continue quickly. “If you do not wed, Sire, there will be no heir to wear the crown after you.”

As if against his will, he nods. “I’ve heard him, and he’s very persuasive.” He puffs his chest out, with a hand over his heart, and duplicates Daag’s stentorian tones: “How can our king beget an heir, someone to hold this land after he’s gone, if he’s only fornicating with the outlander? He must take a female as wife! It is his duty!” He laughs before swallowing a gulp of ale. “If Daag were not such a fool, I’d abdicate, let him sit on the throne and have carnal knowledge of every acceptable female he can find.”

I laugh with him but I know that this is a serious problem and that we must find a solution. “Yesterday, your uncle Rikard told me he has an idea.”

Haajensen’s expression turns guarded. “Go on.”

“Returning from his last foray to the Kingdom of the Isles, he brought a Celtic warrior princess with him.” I can see the image of a woman equal to his own nature settle into Haajensen’s mind. “Her name is Maeve.” I sip my own brew, allowing him time to think. “Rikard says she’s a firebrand and vows never to be touched, much less tamed, by a Viking barbarian! She swears she is a virgin and that no Norseman will have her maidenhead.”

His sky-blue eyes begin to sparkle and I know the door is open. Now, all I have to do is make sure it stays that way. “She might be the prefect vessel for your seed — a woman nearly matched in valor to yourself, to be your queen, to bear your children.”

His smile turns rueful. “It sounds as if you’ve been thinking about this entirely too much, Stav.”

I shrug. “Perhaps. Doesn’t make it any less true, though. Daag is likely to foment unrest unless you take a wife. And, if you must take a wife, why not one you can admire and honor, even if you never love her.”

“Who says she’ll accept me?” I raise a single eyebrow and color floods Haajensen’s cheeks. When I lean forward to kiss him, he catches my hand. “No, I’m serious, what if she hates me on sight?”

“King Haajensen,” I say, with mock-scorn, “when have you ever set your mind to something and failed?”

He gives the question serious thought before shaking his head. “Never.”

I kiss him lightly. “Shall I have Rikard call on us to discuss the situation?”

He sighs deeply. “I suppose you might as well.”

MAEVE

I’ve been a… guest of Rikard’s for mere weeks and, already, he says he has found an honorable solution to all our difficulties. Thankfully, my tutors had insisted I learn the languages of any people we Celts might encounter and I am able to converse with the savage who holds me and the members of my household who were captured with me.

Rikard says that if I agree, for the next fortnight, not to attempt to savage his servants when they bring us food, change our bedding, and empty the slops pail, he will make the necessary arrangements to give me to King Haajensen as wife and queen.

Well, that may solve Rikard’s problem before my kinfolk discover his hidden fortress and raze it to the ground, but it will not solve mine! Who is this King Haajensen whose virtue and accomplishments he extols with such animation? I have certainly never heard of him. Kings seem to be legion in this god-forsaken land of rocks and ragged mountains. I have never been so cold! I long for home but fear I shall never see it again.

Enid is as depressed as I, but swears she will never leave my side; wherever I must go, she will accompany me. She will not accept any of the proposals she has had from Rikard’s knights, no matter how honorable they might be.

So, today we three, Rikard, Enid and I, along with his retainers and my household, journey to King Haajensen. I am covered in the finest, warmest furs it has ever been my pleasure to wear and, beneath, is a gown I would not have believed such savages could produce. I feel almost regal and imagine my father would be proud of me. I hold myself erect and stare down each man whose eyes meet mine. If I am to be queen in this foreign land, then I will be such a queen as they shall never forget.

Rikard’s barge is met by what I assume are royal guards and we are escorted through the small, rustic town to the ancient palace of the kings of this land. The stairs, as we mount them, are wide and impressive.

A chamberlain announces us in tones that echo off the bare walls, and we enter the throne room. Unexpectedly, I am amazed. Innumerable swords make up the horrific chair the king must usually occupy but it is empty. Instead, the king stands to the side, a single warrior at his left hand. I recognize the monarch, my intended, only by the simple crown he wears over his sunlight-hued hair.

Without intent, my eyes are drawn to the sword that hangs off the king’s left hip. I stifle the instant urge in my right hand: the urge to grasp that hilt and feel the blade’s power flow through me. I had heard the tale of the Sky Sword from Rikard but was not prepared for the thrill I feel in its presence.

“My lady…” Enid whispers from slightly behind me. She knows me well and, thankfully, has kept me from making the grave mistake of being too forward.

I will not kneel to this barbarian but I bow slightly and lower my eyes as he walks toward me.

“You are right, again, Stav,” I hear him whisper to his companion. “A female equal to us in strength and fire.”

I raise my eyes and meet his. The blue of the sky, of deep pools, and a few exquisite flowers, greets me. Instead of being cold, however, they hold such warmth and charm I feel my heart melting even as I struggle to find words. I certainly don’t want him to think I’m weak-willed enough to fall under his spell immediately. But, gods above, I have. My heart is no longer my own and, for whatever reason, I know it will belong to this man forever.

He reaches for my hand and I give it. He bows deeply and kisses each of my knuckles, lingering in the contact longer than I would have thought seemly.

“My lady, Maeve.” His voice is a perfect match to his mesmerizing eyes. When he raises his head and gazes into my soul, I am utterly lost. “My future queen,” he murmurs for only my ears to hear.

HAAJENSEN

As required by our traditions, Maeve and her handmaid, Enid, have been sequestered since their arrival, approached only by the members of their household and the few servants of Rikard’s to whom they had become accustomed.

Maeve and I have had only sufficient conversation to come to agreement: she will be my queen and wife. The wedding will take place at the first full moon. Which is tonight.

Stavish has been supportive and encouraging, giving me not the slightest reason to feel as I do, which is as if I am betraying our love for each other.

“Nonsense,” he states, in no uncertain terms, reading my mind. “You and I, Haaj, have a bond no one, male or female, can ever break. We love each other more than life, itself. We’d die for each other.” He runs his strong fingers into my hair and grips tightly. “I’m not saying I won’t envy her for every moment she’ll spend with you, but I promise I won’t wish it were not so.”

He straightens my cloak, adjusts my crown, and pushes me toward the door. “Go, Sire, get married!”

The ceremony is mercifully brief. Afterward, the dinner is extravagant and the liquid refreshment thoroughly enjoyed by almost everyone. Maeve and I, through mutual unspoken agreement, eat and drink sparingly.

When we reach the chamber I have set aside for her — the one that had been my mother’s — I’m surprised by the look in her eyes that borders on timidity. I would have thought she would be prepared for anything. Her uncertainty, though, after the initial discomfort and embarrassment have passed, turns to a smoldering will to please me I have never known from anyone except Stavish.

I vow to satisfy my new queen and then lavish more intimate attention on Stavish than ever before. He must not be allowed to feel he is not my first choice. He is, and always will be!

“You do not love me, Kenneth, and probably never will,” Maeve says, as we enter her quarters on the third night of our marriage. She picks up the linen gown Enid had laid across the foot of the bed and disappears behind the modesty screen. “I see the way you and Ambassador Stavish look at each other,” she continues, as I disrobe. “I have listened to the tales of the battles you two have fought — the obstacles you’ve overcome — and I understand the attachment you feel for each other.”

Coming from behind the partition, her smile is peaceful and she reaches for my hand. “I love Enid as the best friend I’ll ever have but it’s not the kind of love you have for Stavish. You and he share a bond that must not ever be broken. You love each other with a love I think only the gods have known before.”

“Are you not jealous?” I ask, truly humbled.

“No. I’m happy that he returns your feelings. Were it otherwise, I would have his heart cut out and served to me on a platter. You belong together but I also understand your need to father a son, in order to keep this kingdom in the hands of those who treasure it, and not in those whose only wish would be to plunder it. To that purpose, you require a male heir.” She unties the ribbons at her shoulders and lets the gauzy material fall to the floor, holding her arms open to me. “Therefore, come to me, my king, and let us secure your throne.”

MAEVE

After I was captured, only Enid’s constant support and encouragement kept me from killing myself. Now, even though this morning sickness endures beyond the time the midwives tell me it should have ended, I am the happiest of women. I will bear my king’s child in time and I am already positive it is a son. He will guarantee the continuation of my husband’s line. He will thrive and we will be so proud of him.

“Do you think Ambassador Stavish would lie with me?” Enid asks, blotting my sweaty forehead with a soft cloth. She helps me to my feet and toward a chair by the fire. “If the king requested it?”

I sit and study my best friend as a servant darts in and removes the bucket. “Why do you ask that?”

Her eyes cloud and her smile disappears. “I find I want a child.” She puts a gentle hand on my swollen stomach. “The king’s face changes when he looks at you. You say he doesn’t love you but I know he loves the life you carry.” She looks deeply into my eyes. “I want to see that look in Stavish’s eyes.”

“You love him!” I am angry with myself for not having seen it before. Her chin drops and I raise it gently, gazing at her with all the affection I’ve felt for her since we were children. “I shall ask my husband.”

Laughing and sobbing, she falls into my arms.

HAAJENSEN

Stavish snuggles against my chest and I pull the covers over our exhausted bodies. Making love with this warrior, this philosopher, this devoted friend is always more satisfying and thrilling than anything I ever imagined. He is a constant challenge and pleasure and we never seem to disappoint each other.

“How is Maeve?”

His voice is so soft I might have misheard. Jostling him lightly, I wait until he looks up at me. “I’m sorry. We’re lying here together in my royal bed, having just made love with each other through two full bands of the candle, and you’re asking me how my queen is?”

“I am.” His tone is unabashed. “She’s a good woman. I admire and honor her. She’s a wonderful wife to you. The people see her growing your child in her womb and are happy for you both.”

I begin to tickle him and he wiggles, choking out dire threats, until we relax in each other’s arms. I stroke his face and kiss the offered lips softly. “She’ll never have my love and she knows it. But she says she’s pleased to be carrying the throne’s heir and I believe her.”

Stavish nods against my chest. “She’ll do her duty as your queen, and the mother of your son.”

“Are you sure it’s going to be a boy?”

His arms tighten around me. “Your mother has told me so.”

I draw back and lift his face to look at me. “When, lately, have you seen my mother?”

“She came to my chamber the third time you lay with Maeve and told me. He was conceived that night.”

“And why, love of my life, did you not see fit to inform me?”

“Your mother asked me not to. She said you’d find out in good time.”

“Ah…” I draw him back against me and breathe in the scent of the soap he favors for his hair. It has a woodsy smell that I never tire of inhaling. “Enid wants your child.”

What!” Stavish gasps and attempts to sit up. “I don’t have any children to give her. At least, not that I know about.”

I pull him back against me and adjust the covers over his shoulders. “Not a child you’ve already sired, Stav. Sometimes, for an intelligent, worldly, traveled man, you can be very dense.”

“Huh?” He thinks for long moments before blushing. “Oh! Oh! She wants…?”

I chuckle. “According to Maeve, yes.”

“Oh…. Why?”

“Apparently, Enid sees how happy Maeve is and is becoming envious.”

“She watches your queen throw up every morning and decides she wants that?”

I shrug. “Women.” He’s silent for a long time so I prod again. “What would you think about it?”

“What would you think, Sire?”

“Don’t attempt to be subservient, Stav, we’re talking about you and Enid, not me.”

“But there is no me without you, Haaj, you know that!”

“Okay. And the reverse is true also. So, is this similar to what we talked about before the wedding? When we knew it would be my duty to get Maeve with child as soon as possible?”

“Not really. That was about an heir, to help keep Osten Daag’s tongue behind his teeth. Someone to inherit the Iron Throne when you’re finished with it.”

“How delicately you phrase that.”

“Hey! I hope your son will be so old before you’re done, he’ll have to turn to his son to inherit.”

We’re done, you mean.”

“Yes.”

“Now that you’ve succeeded in changing the subject,” I tease, “I’ll change it back.” I am now quite serious. “How would you feel about fathering a child with Enid?”

“Weird, I think.”

“Why?”

His words are almost inaudible. “I haven’t been with a woman since…”

“Do you believe I’d be jealous?”

“I don’t know, would you?”

“Did you have such feelings when I lay with Maeve?”

“No! Because, as I tried to explain, that was for an excellent reason. And Maeve’s turned out to be a good friend. She wasn’t expecting anything except your seed. She wasn’t trying to come between us, break us up.”

“No one could do that,” I vow.

“I know, and that’s why I wasn’t jealous.”

“But, with you and Enid? You’re asking if I would be? Since there’s no political reason for you to have to couple with her?”

“There wouldn’t be a ‘have to’ involved. Enid’s a beautiful, desirable woman — if I still desired women.”

“And…?”

“And, what? Do you think I’d have difficulty getting it up for her?”

“Oh, no, my friend. I don’t think you’d have a moment’s hesitation.”

“Thank you. I think.”

“So, how would you feel?”

“You’re really pressing this, aren’t you?”

“I love Maeve. No! Don’t give me that slit-eyed look, I admire and value her. She’s been an excellent help to us.”

“You’re right,” he agrees, “and I do know that.”

 “It’s just that I used the word, love. Is that it?”

“Yes, I guess so.”

“You are my love, Dawid Stavish, you always have been and you always will be. But Maeve is my queen. She will be the mother of my child. And she wants this for her best friend. She says the children will be close and grow up to love and support each other.”

“As we do.”

“Yes.”

“Then, how can I decline?”

“Good! Because Maeve tells me Enid wishes it to be tonight.”

Tonight?”

“According to Maeve, Enid believes if you lay with her tonight, you will not have to do so again.”

“How can she know something like that?”

“I have no idea, but do you doubt?”

“No.” He grew thoughtful. “Women know women’s things.”

“Indeed. So. Will you do as Maeve and Enid wish?”

“Okay. I guess so. If you’re sure.”

“I did my part with Maeve. This time, it’s your turn.”

STAVISH

I sit next to King Haajensen on the balcony outside the throne room, the light of a single candle sufficient to allow me to see the starlight mirrored in his blue eyes.

By silent, mutual agreement, our hands reach for each other and join.

I think back to the day I entered the room behind us for the first time and feel my face form the smile in my heart. The very best years of my life have been lived here in this little kingdom of the North.

Haaj and I have known a love few, if any, other humans have experienced. We have fought side by side, defended his land and crown from all who would have taken it from him. We have seen our people grow content. Our own children thrive and Erik is a man full-grown, prepared for rule. We can ask no more.

“The gods, and those who dwell in Valhalla, will welcome you,” Haaj tells me, quietly.

I have my doubts. “Why should they?”

“Because,” a deep, male voice says, “you have loved our son, Warrior.”

“And shown only respect and honor to our people,” a mellifluous female voice adds.

Haaj squeezes my hand and I realize I am ready. But… my stomach grumbles… maybe not right away. “Are we expecting guests for dinner, Haaj?”

“Not that I know of,” he replies. “Why?”

“Don’t I smell pig?”

“Ah, the cooks have uncovered the roasting pit and you’re salivating already. That’s the boar Erik killed last week.”

“His biggest one yet,” I say with pride.

“So it was! The head will require weeks of preparation before it’s ready to be hung on the wall, but Maeve told me the massive body won’t keep in this weather until the next scheduled festival.”

“So, we’ll eat it tonight?” In anticipation, my gut begins making highly impolite sounds. I clap a hand across my belly. “Sorry. I must be hungry.”

My king throws his head back and laughs, and there’s so much joy in it, I can’t help but add my own happiness. He hauls me to my feet and leads me inside. “Tonight, my love, we feast!”

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20 Responses to December 19th- Adventures of Stavish and Haaj Part 2 by DP Patricks

  1. Pat says:

    Oh. My. God. This image is so incredibly perfect, Elves, I’m speechless. THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH. Merry Christmas, you’ve just made mine extremely happy!

  2. Nancy Roots says:

    Wonderful end to this story, Pat! Satisfying in the extreme! Thank you so much for this lovely gift! KUDOS

    Haaj and his Stavish
    Connected, two with one soul
    Loving through the years

    • Pat says:

      Thanks, Nancy, I’m glad Part II was satisfying; you’re more than welcome! Your wonderful Haiku is another gift to me so I’ll do my best to reply:

      Mirrored by a sword,
      the years of trust, support, love
      still live in their eyes

  3. Jenny Conti says:

    Fabulous! I really enjoyed this. The characters are so beautifully nuanced. I’m so happy that Maeve fit so well into the story. It would indeed have been necessary for the king to father an heir.

    • Pat says:

      Thank you, Jenny, I’m really glad you liked it. I’ll treasure your words, “beautifully nuanced.” I appreciate your reading and then taking the time in this busy season to leave your considered comment.

  4. MatSir says:

    Beautiful! But I’m greedy – maybe next year we can read some of the adventures of young Erik Haajensen and young Stavish?

    • Pat says:

      Thanks, MatSir. I’ve actually been thinking about Stavish & Haaj in Valhalla, but maybe your suggestion is better. Thanks for the idea and we’ll see what my muses come up with. In the meantime, I’m grateful for the time you spent reading and, even more, for the kind words. Thank YOU.

  5. Spencer says:

    Wow – what an interesting story. There should be more Maeves in the world. And of course, Stavishes and Haajs. 😀

  6. Maria (MHE) Priest says:

    A fabulous conclusion to this entry! The love between Haag & Stavish comes through so clearly, as does their duty to Haag’s kingdom. And Maeve is a wonderful OC. Hope they all enjoyed the boar!

    And the illo: absolutely fabulous.

    • Pat says:

      What lovely things to say, Maria, THANK YOU! I’m told roast boar is great but I’ve yet to be able to confirm or deny that declaration. Thanks so much for reading and then for leaving your kind comment.
      Yep, fabulous illo!

  7. Garrideb (Monica M) says:

    Great conclusion! I admit I was scared you were going to kill Haaj at the beginning, so I was relieved when you allowed the spirit of his mother to intervene! That scene was very sweet. And I liked that their feelings for each other came out into the open at that time. It was also fun to get outside point-of-view from Maeve on the Stavish/Haaj relationship.

    • Pat says:

      Oh I couldn’t have killed off Haaj at the beginning of Part II; that would have been a terrible thing to do! (Thanks for being worried, though.) And I’m happy that you liked Maeve’s point of view; I enjoyed writing about their love from her perspective; glad it worked for you.
      Thanks very much for reading and then for taking the time during this busy season to leave your kind, considered comment. Both are greatly appreciated!

  8. LauraY says:

    Lovely story, Pat, and an elegant solution to the “heir problem.”

    • Pat says:

      Thanks so much, Laura. I sincerely hope you get notified of my reply; sorry I’ve left it so late. Flamingo urged all submitters to check back on the Bromance Page today and I’m doing just that.
      I’m really happy that you enjoyed my little venture into their further adventures. Have a truly Happy New Year!

  9. wightfaerie says:

    Excellent ending, sweetie. I, too, was a little worried at the beginning of this part, but I had faith in you – lol. Maeve makes a fitting queen. She made me think of my mum, whose name was Mavis, but was shortened a lot to Mav, same sound, different spelling. Can’t wait for more installments, kids and all!

    Excellent artwork, Elves. Perfect.

    Thank you to all for this amazing present xx

    • Pat says:

      So glad you liked it, WF; you are, after all, the one I was writing it for, last calendar and this one! Wouldn’t have thought of any of it without that initial image. Another installment? I’ll have to think about that.
      Thanks very, very much for reading and then for leaving your kind LoC. Both mean a lot to me!

  10. Beena Thomas says:

    A wonderful ending for such an awesome story.Exceptionally done.Commendable.Loved this.Thank you so much for such a fabulous read.

    • pat says:

      You are, as always more than welcome, Beena. Thank YOU for reading and then leaving your lovely comment so late into the New Year. I know what you’ve been going through, my friend, and I’m thrilled that you had time for this. Thank you so much.

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